This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 29; the 29th Edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The topic for this month is 'TWO MINUTES'
TWO MINUTES- 55 FICTION.
Farting engines,
Obsessed buses,
Scorching sun,
Sweating folks...
“BOOM”
An old man got smashed between wheels; few good hearts carried him to trauma centre.
Doctor- “I’m sorry, we could have saved him if you have made it bit earlier”
Folks- “But, sir this accident took place just TWO MINUTES ago!!!”
Doctor- “Awww…?”
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Great take, Deepak. Clear, cool and moving script !
ReplyDeleteI laughed at the docs reaction! :-/ I am sorry, I am too cruel!lol
ReplyDeleteATB!
Different take on the topic.
ReplyDeleteall the best:)
@panchalibolchithank youuuuu :)
ReplyDelete@Kappu haha me too :) thanks a ton !
ReplyDeleteGood one DK!
ReplyDeleteHmmm...Poor Old Man!! Who do we blame ...the state of our roads or the state of our hospitals? A lot conveyed Deepak! Good Luck! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat 55 post Deepak and liked your narration. All the best for BAT-29
ReplyDeletenice one DK
ReplyDeleteMy reaction "Ayiooooo"
ReplyDeleteThat was short and crisp. Lot conveyed. Very well penned.
ReplyDeleteLol, the doc's reaction is out of this world!
ReplyDeleteHehe. Amazing that you could encapsulate a story in only a few words
ReplyDeleteATB
Cheers
CRD
do visit mine
Very nice Deepak . . .
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Ashwini
Good try.. Keep writing! All the best for BAT!
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Very spontaneous, crisp, satirical yet comical write up Deepak. It does bring smile on the face despite that pathetic situation you've mentioned :)
ReplyDeleteNice, clean and clear. :) ATB!
ReplyDeleteSimple, short and ofcourse very funny. :-)
ReplyDeleteGood one. Really nice :)
ReplyDeleteThe second line had me rolling on the floor :)
ReplyDeleteGood one :)
ReplyDeleteRegards
village girl
May be Doctor also died after it.
ReplyDelete@all :) thank you very much :) thanks fro reading it patiently and expressing your views...
ReplyDeletekeep doing it plz :)
great...
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Dont know whether to laugh or feel sad for the old man :P
ReplyDeleteGet well soon.
ReplyDeleteShort and wonderful post All The Best Deepak
ReplyDeleteYeah..it might be 'just 2 min', but it is also the minute diff btwn life and death!!
ReplyDeletehahaha... Loved it...
ReplyDeletegud read , wen will u bring the 3rd part of the chennai girl story..wen wen uuuhhhhh...am waiting :D
ReplyDeleteThat was good :).
ReplyDeletePity! BOOM ;)
ReplyDeleteToo good as always:) All the best Dee:)
ReplyDeletehow could have the accident taken 2 min earlier... and he was brought to the hospital immediately???? :) :D
ReplyDelete2 minutes can not just cook noodles, but could go to extent of someone loosing life too. I like your style of writing. Good one Deepak.
ReplyDeletea sad but good story ! I realized that 2 minutes can have such an impact!
ReplyDeleteTime and Tide never waits for anyone...proved here :)
ReplyDeletePrecious moments.
ReplyDeleteKarthik, have a look at my first try at 55.
http://maks-journy-nevr-ends.blogspot.in/2012/06/intimacy-in-55-words.html
Took me twenty seconds to read...But it carries a thought worth twenty minutes of thinking.
ReplyDeleteTakes me back to a road accident I recently encountered. Angers and frustrates me.
HAppy blog-a-ton! Write what u think :) Cheers.
That is the reality. Everything needs to be have done two minutes ago at least!
ReplyDeleteA short one but a strong one!!
ReplyDeleteThat`s a rather harsh take but possibly true as well...
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