July 1, 2012

TWO MINUTES

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This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 29; the 29th Edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The topic for this month is 'TWO MINUTES'


TWO MINUTES- 55 FICTION.

Busy bee roads,
Farting engines,
Obsessed  buses,
Scorching sun,
Sweating folks...

“BOOM”
An old man got smashed between wheels; few good hearts carried him to trauma centre.

Doctor- “I’m sorry, we could have saved him if you have made it bit earlier”
Folks- “But, sir this accident took place just TWO MINUTES ago!!!”
Doctor- “Awww…?”












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42 comments:

  1. PanchaliJuly 1, 2012 at 9:38 PM

    Great take, Deepak. Clear, cool and moving script !

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  2. KappuJuly 1, 2012 at 10:18 PM

    I laughed at the docs reaction! :-/ I am sorry, I am too cruel!lol

    ATB!

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  3. M'Bai MadrasiJuly 1, 2012 at 11:11 PM

    Different take on the topic.
    all the best:)

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  4. Deepak KarthikJuly 1, 2012 at 11:14 PM

    @panchalibolchithank youuuuu :)

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  5. Deepak KarthikJuly 1, 2012 at 11:14 PM

    @Kappu haha me too :) thanks a ton !

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  6. C SureshJuly 2, 2012 at 8:14 AM

    Good one DK!

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  7. Jayashree SrivatsanJuly 2, 2012 at 11:47 AM

    Hmmm...Poor Old Man!! Who do we blame ...the state of our roads or the state of our hospitals? A lot conveyed Deepak! Good Luck! :)

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  8. EngramsJuly 2, 2012 at 12:51 PM

    Great 55 post Deepak and liked your narration. All the best for BAT-29

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  9. Shashiprakash SainiJuly 2, 2012 at 2:04 PM

    nice one DK

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  10. DeepaJuly 2, 2012 at 2:52 PM

    My reaction "Ayiooooo"

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  11. ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ AshwiniJuly 2, 2012 at 6:51 PM

    That was short and crisp. Lot conveyed. Very well penned.

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  12. O'SJuly 2, 2012 at 9:15 PM

    Lol, the doc's reaction is out of this world!

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  13. CRDJuly 2, 2012 at 11:11 PM

    Hehe. Amazing that you could encapsulate a story in only a few words

    ATB

    Cheers
    CRD

    do visit mine

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  14. Ashwini DeyJuly 2, 2012 at 11:59 PM

    Very nice Deepak . . .

    A award is waiting for you. Check out here -
    http://liveuploud.blogspot.com/2012/07/something-awesome-and-sorry.html

    Ashwini

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  15. Someone is SpecialJuly 3, 2012 at 1:48 AM

    Good try.. Keep writing! All the best for BAT!

    Someone is Special

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  16. AnuJuly 3, 2012 at 4:59 AM

    Very spontaneous, crisp, satirical yet comical write up Deepak. It does bring smile on the face despite that pathetic situation you've mentioned :)

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  17. AnonymousJuly 3, 2012 at 4:03 PM

    Nice, clean and clear. :) ATB!

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  18. UnknownJuly 3, 2012 at 4:40 PM

    Simple, short and ofcourse very funny. :-)

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  19. JJJuly 3, 2012 at 5:46 PM

    Good one. Really nice :)

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  20. UnknownJuly 4, 2012 at 12:22 AM

    The second line had me rolling on the floor :)

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  21. roopzJuly 4, 2012 at 9:26 AM

    Good one :)

    Regards
    village girl

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  22. HRJuly 4, 2012 at 12:23 PM

    May be Doctor also died after it.

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  23. Deepak KarthikJuly 4, 2012 at 1:33 PM

    @all :) thank you very much :) thanks fro reading it patiently and expressing your views...
    keep doing it plz :)

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  24. RajnishJuly 4, 2012 at 4:27 PM

    great...
    www.rajnishonline.blogspot.com

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  25. NehaJuly 4, 2012 at 5:25 PM

    Dont know whether to laugh or feel sad for the old man :P

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  26. AnonymousJuly 4, 2012 at 6:47 PM

    Get well soon.

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  27. Vikas KhairJuly 4, 2012 at 6:50 PM

    Short and wonderful post All The Best Deepak

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  28. ManasaJuly 4, 2012 at 9:01 PM

    Yeah..it might be 'just 2 min', but it is also the minute diff btwn life and death!!

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  29. muthuJuly 4, 2012 at 10:15 PM

    hahaha... Loved it...

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  30. UnknownJuly 4, 2012 at 10:23 PM

    gud read , wen will u bring the 3rd part of the chennai girl story..wen wen uuuhhhhh...am waiting :D

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  31. RachnaJuly 5, 2012 at 9:17 AM

    That was good :).

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  32. Vishal KatariaJuly 5, 2012 at 11:33 AM

    Pity! BOOM ;)

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  33. AmitAagJuly 5, 2012 at 12:00 PM

    Too good as always:) All the best Dee:)

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  34. Sahithya SridharJuly 5, 2012 at 2:17 PM

    how could have the accident taken 2 min earlier... and he was brought to the hospital immediately???? :) :D

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  35. Sushma HarishJuly 5, 2012 at 4:21 PM

    2 minutes can not just cook noodles, but could go to extent of someone loosing life too. I like your style of writing. Good one Deepak.

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  36. DeepzJuly 5, 2012 at 6:18 PM

    a sad but good story ! I realized that 2 minutes can have such an impact!

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  37. UnknownJuly 6, 2012 at 8:25 AM

    Time and Tide never waits for anyone...proved here :)

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  38. MakJuly 6, 2012 at 8:28 PM

    Precious moments.

    Karthik, have a look at my first try at 55.
    http://maks-journy-nevr-ends.blogspot.in/2012/06/intimacy-in-55-words.html

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  39. MadhushaJuly 7, 2012 at 3:01 PM

    Took me twenty seconds to read...But it carries a thought worth twenty minutes of thinking.

    Takes me back to a road accident I recently encountered. Angers and frustrates me.

    HAppy blog-a-ton! Write what u think :) Cheers.

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  40. aativasJuly 8, 2012 at 12:32 PM

    That is the reality. Everything needs to be have done two minutes ago at least!

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  41. ManasaJuly 8, 2012 at 10:30 PM

    A short one but a strong one!!

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  42. Richi BaidwanJuly 16, 2012 at 1:59 AM

    That`s a rather harsh take but possibly true as well...

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