I can fly and got a weightless feel, I can see people rushing, kids with over-weighted school bags and full packed buses farting black clouds.
Wait…
I can see a familiar face lying unconscious.
Mute spectators all around his body. “Call an ambulance” I yelled.
As none heard…I said, Dear “Humanity” Rest in Peace.
Stunned...It couldn't have been any better...beautiful message... :O
ReplyDeletesob sob......i knew it was in death bed ailing for ages..finally it passed away.....RIP HUMANITY.... :D,
ReplyDeleteas far as d post is concerned crisp and inspiring :)
Oh Well, Humanity is rested in piece these days.
ReplyDeleteBrought out the current situation. Very well written Dee :)
@CYNOSUREThank you very much sarab :)
ReplyDelete@Ranjana's craft blogThank you ji :)
ReplyDelete@saikat mbka ghoshThank you bro :)
ReplyDelete@Princess PooThank you poo :) its happening
ReplyDeletechooooooooooper 55 :) :) kutti and deathla oru alagu :) :)
ReplyDelete@Uma UthraTHANK YOU SO MUCH UMA :)
ReplyDeleteSo, as I was saying :) I love how beautifully this slaps everyone and wakes them up. Atleast that's what it did to me. :-)
ReplyDelete@Between life's doings THANK YOU VERY VERY MUCH FOR COMMENTING AGAIN :)
ReplyDeletehappy for that :)
Started off slowly but the ending, brilliant. Very true but sad message.
ReplyDeleteawesome yaar :)
ReplyDelete@Akshay Kumar Gyeah slow to fast :D
ReplyDeletethanks akshay :)
@NehaThanks Neha,, try soon :)
ReplyDeleteDee - Great one!! I share my feelings with Cynosure, it couldn't have been any better ..
ReplyDeleteVery impressive and powerful...
ReplyDeleteWow! Poignant! Beautiful point!
ReplyDeletehow could u include social things in your writing... its amazing..Each and every post which you are writing, its a message to all..keep going.....
ReplyDeleteWow...loved it. :) :)
ReplyDeletethat was Amazing :) Love it
ReplyDeleteVery good..very very good :)
ReplyDelete!! I have no suitable words for your excellence Dee..plz excuse me:)
ReplyDeleteJust splendid..
ReplyDelete@Sangeeta Reghu NairThank you very very much ji :)
ReplyDelete@Saru SinghalThank you so much Saru :)
ReplyDelete@UpasanaThanks Upsana :)
ReplyDelete@சேகர்Nandri nanba :) etho eluthurathu than... unga comment enna romba inspire paniduchu... thank you very much nanba !
ReplyDelete@vinayThanks Bro...
ReplyDelete@Smile :-)haha :) thank you smile :D
ReplyDelete@Ana_treekThanks Keerthana !
ReplyDelete@AmitAagWhat sire ? i am not even 1% of you :) thank you very much !
ReplyDelete@SoniaThank you so much SOnia :)
ReplyDeleteloved it... very thoughtful and thought provoking.. :)
ReplyDeleteIt is a sad thing - the deteriorating humanity.. :( :(
ReplyDeleteGreat message, well done Deepak :)
wow deepak this is such a great though conveyed in simple words...
ReplyDeleteTo be honest (whenever someone says that, I realize that he means he has not been honest till now), I like your full bodied posts more than your fffs. These read like someone has tied Deepak to a post. Deepak unbound is much more fun. These feel like the new instant noodle single servings, same price, less quantity.
ReplyDeleteNice one; you are getting to be really good at this too.
This is superb :)
ReplyDelete@GayathriThank you....
ReplyDelete@AbhinavThanks abhinav
ReplyDelete@zradarThanks chechi !
ReplyDelete@Subhorup DasguptaLOL :) okies SUbh gotcha!
ReplyDelete@Shamsudthanks
ReplyDeleteOne word = WOW Deepak! Just WOW! :) You said that so damn right!
ReplyDeleteExcellent Deepak...brilliant, touchy n relevant
ReplyDeleteWow!! that one was damn good deepak!! :) :)
ReplyDelete@Jen..The Butterfly EffectThank you so much JEN
ReplyDelete@riteshThanks Ritesh :)
ReplyDelete@vidhyaThanks eruma
ReplyDeleteThought-provoking post Deepak.
ReplyDeletevery nice Deepak.. way to go!!
ReplyDeleteUnique n so true. Loved it
ReplyDeleteyes humanity is dead long back.. Awesome and very impressive post
ReplyDeletehow the hell do you do that? one heart-rending, eye-opener of a story in less than least words? wow..
ReplyDeleteand kudos for the work. you rock!
How do you write it so effectively using so few words, I wonder. Beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThat was well said.. crisp yet compelling.
ReplyDelete@MakThank you Mak:)
ReplyDelete@KajalThanks KCN :D
ReplyDelete@shilpi3005Thanks a ton :)
ReplyDelete@Rambling Of A Single Girl In The CityTrue... its dead :) thank you
ReplyDelete@RaphaelThanks a ton Azra :) happy to see your comment... i don't find any greatness in writing such post :)
ReplyDeletei appreciate your appreciation.
@HarithaThank you Chechi :) glad to read your comment !
ReplyDelete@ObsessivemomThanks a ton ji :)
ReplyDeleteDeep thinking from Deep-ak.
ReplyDeleteNice one Deepak... and yes humanity is resting in pieces (not peace)..Lolzzz
ReplyDeleteWow...loved it :)
ReplyDeleteso very true ! loved it !
ReplyDeleteYour brilliance in 55 fiction is getting better and better. :) Way to go Deepak. Another strong message.
ReplyDeleteThought provoking post!!
ReplyDeleteWoow Deepak!
ReplyDeleteHard hitting truth indeed !
That's a wonderful 55 fiction i've ever read!! I loved the way u explained the concept in such simple words! ^_^ Lovelyyy!
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