February 25, 2012

TICK TICK(55 fiction)

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Tick Tick… A tall man swiftly followed a short woman but she slowly advanced.
 It has been 59 minutes since they broke up, Reason- PUNCTUALITY.  
Seconds later as he hugged and merged him with her.
The Giant Clock gonged 12 times, soon after the 12th gong they departed.
Running for their next reunion (short)…Tick Tick…

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27 comments:

  1. Princess PooFebruary 25, 2012 at 5:15 PM

    Hmm!! Short and Sweet to be precise :D.
    Love it <3 ;)

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  2. vinayFebruary 25, 2012 at 6:31 PM

    Awesome. :) :)

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  3. Deepak KarthikFebruary 25, 2012 at 7:07 PM

    @Princess PooThanks princess... loved it

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  4. Deepak KarthikFebruary 25, 2012 at 7:07 PM

    @vinayThanks vinay !

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  5. CYNOSUREFebruary 25, 2012 at 7:19 PM

    excellent one... :)

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  6. EngramsFebruary 25, 2012 at 8:34 PM

    ooohh deepak...nice !!!

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  7. Deepak KarthikFebruary 25, 2012 at 10:48 PM

    @CYNOSUREThanks Sarab !

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  8. Deepak KarthikFebruary 25, 2012 at 10:48 PM

    @EngramThanks sir !

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  9. Archana NagarajanFebruary 25, 2012 at 10:50 PM

    Good one :)

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  10. Deepak KarthikFebruary 25, 2012 at 10:52 PM

    @Archana NagarajanThank you archana !

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  11. SMFebruary 26, 2012 at 1:42 AM

    short but sweet
    good fiction

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  12. Red HandedFebruary 26, 2012 at 8:40 AM

    How could anyone end up thinking this situation out!
    Brilliant!!
    Btw why cnat I see the date your post was published?

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  13. Lancy February 26, 2012 at 10:01 AM

    Lovelyy :D :D

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  14. Saru SinghalFebruary 26, 2012 at 10:21 AM

    WOW...Quite an interesting thought and nicely written Deepak...:)

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  15. Deepak KarthikFebruary 26, 2012 at 10:47 AM

    @SMThank you sir !

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  16. Deepak KarthikFebruary 26, 2012 at 10:47 AM

    @Red Handedoops YOU HERE :D glad to see you ! THANKS

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  17. Deepak KarthikFebruary 26, 2012 at 10:48 AM

    @LancyThanks Lancy !

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  18. Deepak KarthikFebruary 26, 2012 at 10:48 AM

    @Saru SinghalGlad to see you liking it :) thank you !

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  19. Deepak KarthikFebruary 26, 2012 at 10:48 AM

    @Red HandedWill check that out :D thanks for notifying it !

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  20. Jen..The Butterfly EffectFebruary 26, 2012 at 2:59 PM

    Sweet post! :)

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  21. DellaFebruary 26, 2012 at 7:25 PM

    i never would have guessed that this was about the clock's hands until the very last line. good one!

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  22. Deepak KarthikFebruary 26, 2012 at 9:13 PM

    @Jen..The Butterfly EffectTahnks Jen !

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  23. MakFebruary 26, 2012 at 11:47 PM

    Very creative. Have never come accross anything like this ever before.

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  24. Deepak KarthikFebruary 27, 2012 at 1:13 PM

    @MakThanks MAK

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  25. RajFebruary 27, 2012 at 10:51 PM

    A very interesting and different story. :) Nicely told. You are becoming a 55 fiction expert dude. :)

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  26. Deepak KarthikMarch 1, 2012 at 5:59 PM

    @Rajtoo much for me raj :D
    thank you so much...

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  27. Deepak KarthikMarch 1, 2012 at 5:59 PM

    @Ashwini C NThanks a ton :D

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Thanks a Ton for your words :) Keep visiting :)

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