" Wealthy foreigner visited a temple, at the gates he saw a beggar with a stray dog, he took out the cash from his bag and donated it to beggar. For the dog he was feeding his biscuits, Minutes later beggar vanished with cash bag but the faithful dog walked behind foreigner to find that beggar… "
Gratitude is one of the greatest virtue and it means a lot to me, being a dog for a person who helped me to overcome my tough times is the least reciprocation that i can provide him back.
Humans lack this basic virtue, which dogs and other animals has it in abundance,
Pretty sad but damn true. people lacks gratitude...
According to me, a man without showing thankfulness is a "dash".. i don't wanna compare an ingratitude person with any other word, it is a shame to that word not to that person...
P:S-This is my 2ND 55 fiction post(so called)and certainly not aimed to lure comments or votes but to convey a strong message to HUMANITY,"BE THANKFUL TO PEOPLE WHO HELPED YOU AT TIMES".Though i say it as FICTION, it happens and happened to me :D
Humans lack this basic virtue, which dogs and other animals has it in abundance,
Pretty sad but damn true. people lacks gratitude...
According to me, a man without showing thankfulness is a "dash".. i don't wanna compare an ingratitude person with any other word, it is a shame to that word not to that person...
P:S-This is my 2ND 55 fiction post(so called)and certainly not aimed to lure comments or votes but to convey a strong message to HUMANITY,"BE THANKFUL TO PEOPLE WHO HELPED YOU AT TIMES".Though i say it as FICTION, it happens and happened to me :D
A 55 fiction with a moral. You are definitely a genius! Keep rocking!
ReplyDelete@dellaGenius ?? too much for me della :) thanks for the comment, you said my prev post inspired you to write, i checked yours and got back that enthu :) so i wrote this :P THANKS
ReplyDeleteSo true..I would have probably dragged it n made 500 words out of it :D but u explained it so well in 55 words, its a challenge..and a gr8 moral too.
ReplyDelete@radsyeah even 500 will not be enough :( thanks for your regular comment rads, i owe you something :)
ReplyDeleteyou have mastered this 55 Fiction writing...good one... :)
ReplyDeleteWow.. another brilliant one Deepak. And it was an impactful and thought provoking story as well. All told in so few words. Too good. :)
ReplyDeleteHave a little faith on the humans my friend :-) That said nice one!
ReplyDeleteWell written within 55 words Karthik..keep it up !!!
ReplyDeleteGood one...a message out of 55 words, simply great. :) :)
ReplyDeleteso true deepak!
ReplyDeleteWoah!! You rock man! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat work Karthik Sahib! Keep it up!!
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Superb work Deepak :).
ReplyDeleteYour words are so true.
Dogs are my most favorite animal.
Their faithfulness and friendliness pleases beyond anything else.
A Dog is a man's best friend ;) :D.
nice one bro. short and sweet message which precisely points out to the most lacking ability of a human being.
ReplyDeleteAnother brilliant attempt with a nice message. Great going bro. :)
ReplyDeletehard truth!
ReplyDeleteIt is a very very nice attempt on your part but I'd suggest that you shouldn't expand your write-up beyond those 55 words.
ReplyDeleteIt eats away the magic of 55F.
Brilliant piece this was :)
@CYNOSUREThanks a ton sarab !
ReplyDelete@SuchiHAHA :D got it :D
ReplyDelete@SuchiThank you :D
ReplyDelete@EngramThank you sir :)
ReplyDelete@vinayYo bro, thanks a ton !
ReplyDelete@magiceyeThanks ji :) keep reading !
ReplyDelete@~iyshu~hey thanks iysh :D
ReplyDelete@AmitAagThank you sir !
ReplyDelete@Princess PooDogs are women's best friend too :P :D :D thanks pooh
ReplyDelete@Hitesh Varshan lovely, thanks a ton Hitesh :)
ReplyDelete@Akshay Kumar GThank you bro !
ReplyDelete@joshidaniel.comThanks Joshi :)
ReplyDelete@Seяendipity™glad to see some honest suggestion, will try to implement :) thanksss
ReplyDeleteso short and yet to touched an important fact. most of us lack gratitude. and it bugs me when people don't appreciate how much you've put in to help them out etc. sure,i didnt do it for the sake of a silly thanks. yet,hey! how can you be so mean and take me for granted??
ReplyDeletecheers buddy!
A good point made here Deepak, Gratitude is a quality that is becoming rarer by the day. Cheers for the 55 challenge! Well done :)
ReplyDelete@RaphaelHEHE :P lovely comment.. KUDOS
ReplyDelete@Arnab MaityHEy thanks bro... encouraging !
ReplyDeleteThat's what beggars do.. their job is to look for money. He left the cash bag carelessly and expects the beggar to ignore it ??
ReplyDelete@Rajawow wow wow, dude.. are you joking or serious ?
ReplyDeleteIf you are joking, IT WAS A JOKE OF THE CENTURY
If you are serious, look for the word IGNORANT in dictionary...
Thanks a ton for stopping by...
I'm very happy that you didn't misinterpret my comment. :)
ReplyDeleteWaiting for your next 55F :)
gratitude in today's world?!?!? kinda getting EXTINCT :P its just that we gotta accept people the way they are :)
ReplyDeleteDogs! Aren't they the best of creatures on earth? There really is a lot to learn from them.
ReplyDeleteAnd u put your message across very nicely.
ReplyDelete@Uma UthraCheers.. Thank you !
ReplyDelete@Seяendipity™WElcome and glad to see you checking my replies !
ReplyDelete@D.NambiarYes they are :) thank you !
ReplyDeleteVery true, Deepak. Very well said.
ReplyDeleteIf we learn to live with gratitude, life will become a lot easier and we'll live with lesser desire.
SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPERB :) !!!! we need to learn gratitude from Animals who have learnt this art better than us :)
ReplyDeleteI am curious to know what you have placed at the place of that "DASH" if you have to?
ReplyDeleteWell, a brilliant post, must say!
Brilliant Deepak ... you've written such a great lesson in just a few words ... god bless you !!
ReplyDeletehope this one helps in people becoming a bit humane ..
ReplyDeletegood one deepak.
Bikram's
Ofcourse who said Fiction was just fiction!! Fiction is nothing but a fragment of our own selves and incidents that have occured in our lives :)!!
ReplyDeleteYes Gratitude is one of the greatest virtues of life!! :) nice post *Deeepak!!!:)
@Vishal KatariaThank you Vishal...
ReplyDelete@saikat mbka ghoshSAikat Thanks a ton !
ReplyDelete@Gopal SharmaHaha will tell you in personal :) thank you
ReplyDelete@Sangeeta Reghu Nairthank you soo much JI
ReplyDelete@BikramjitThanks bro :)
ReplyDelete@Jen..The Butterfly EffectThank you JEN
ReplyDeleteGood one! :)..I have never tried writing this, but it needs talent man..very good!
ReplyDeleteHey! You've been tagged, check my blog :) Hoping you'll carry it forward :)
ReplyDeletehey excellent piece ! welll i was inspired ! my scenario includes a phone call too.. check it out ? http://colouredbydreamz.blogspot.in/2012/02/55-fiction_17.html
ReplyDelete@Ana_treekThanks keerthana !
ReplyDelete@radsHAHA SORRY FOR LATE RESPONSE !
ReplyDelete@malinygood one DR
ReplyDelete@Ashwini C NThats soo sweet ashwini ! thanks a lot
ReplyDeletewell said! nice to read the truth!
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