February 22, 2012

COVERT -55 fiction

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Should I propose her now? Can she hear? Her husband stands with her and so her kids, relatives. Should I spoil this ceremony? Why did I waste all these years? I’m doing it.
He had made his mind to let her know and walked towards her. 
By then the old Priest had closed her COFFIN.

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89 comments:

  1. Uma UthraFebruary 22, 2012 at 10:48 PM

    sooooooooooper 55 :) :) COFFIN ah??? kavunthiduchu plan :P :P sooper dooper :)

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  2. Deepak KarthikFebruary 22, 2012 at 10:50 PM

    @Uma UthraHEHE THANKS :D cute comment !

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  3. abhinavrFebruary 22, 2012 at 11:12 PM

    Another nice post... :):):)

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  4. Deepak KarthikFebruary 22, 2012 at 11:14 PM

    @AbhinavThanks a ton abhinav :D

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  5. KajalFebruary 22, 2012 at 11:27 PM

    LOl.. you cracked me up on this:)

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  6. Deepak KarthikFebruary 22, 2012 at 11:31 PM

    @KajalHaha Glad for that :) Thank you

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  7. CYNOSUREFebruary 23, 2012 at 12:06 AM

    awesome one deepak...seriously...I loved this one... :)

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  8. UnknownFebruary 23, 2012 at 12:43 AM

    That was bloody intense! WOW!

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  9. Ranjana's craft blogFebruary 23, 2012 at 5:29 AM

    Good one

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  10. Ashwini DeyFebruary 23, 2012 at 7:57 AM

    Superb, bro . . . . You have proved that love never ends, it prevail even after death . . . .

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  11. ~iyshu~February 23, 2012 at 8:13 AM

    Good one Dee :)

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  12. vinayFebruary 23, 2012 at 8:25 AM

    Awesome..your best 55 fiction till date. :) :)

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  13. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 9:49 AM

    @CYNOSUREThanks sarab :)

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  14. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 9:49 AM

    @AKILA VENKATThanks AKila, Keep visiting !

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  15. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 9:49 AM

    @Ranjana's craft blogThank you JI

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  16. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 9:49 AM

    @Ashwini DeyThanks a ton Ashwini.. Keep visiting

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  17. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 9:50 AM

    @~iyshu~Thanks Iysh !

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  18. ShilpiFebruary 23, 2012 at 9:50 AM

    Intensity personified :)
    Nice one Dee :D

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  19. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 9:53 AM

    @SanjanaThank you SAnjana !

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  20. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 9:54 AM

    @vinayBRO :P thanks a ton... all for you to MAKE A MOVIE in future:D

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  21. Princess PooFebruary 23, 2012 at 11:14 AM

    Oh my god!! What a total turn of events.
    I expected an Happy Ending and "wow".
    Extremely good Dee :D ;).
    Loved it <3

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  22. DimpleFebruary 23, 2012 at 12:49 PM

    This is my first chance to read ur fiction.. When I was reading the first two lines I was shocked and was almost curious to know what happens next and coffin part really took me by surprise . I felt Oh no! in my heart.. good one ...

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  23. DivyaFebruary 23, 2012 at 1:27 PM

    Nice twist to the tale :-) You are becoming a pro with 55..

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  24. Jayashree SrivatsanFebruary 23, 2012 at 3:10 PM

    Wow!! That was a good one!!

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  25. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 4:28 PM

    @Princess PooTHANKS PRINCESS :D

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  26. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 4:29 PM

    @Rambling Of A Single Girl In The CityThank you so much
    visit often :D

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  27. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 4:29 PM

    @Rambling Of A Single Girl In The CityThank you so much
    visit often :D

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  28. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 4:29 PM

    @DivyaThanks a ton :) a comment from you is spl :)

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  29. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 4:30 PM

    @jaish_vatsThank you so much :)

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  30. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2012 at 5:05 PM

    Sad.. But i was able to understand

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  31. UnknownFebruary 23, 2012 at 6:04 PM

    wow , that one was really touching bst uptil now, grt goin :)

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  32. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 6:09 PM

    @Smile :-)Glad for that :) thank you :D

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  33. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 6:09 PM

    @saikat mbka ghoshthanks saikat :D

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  34. Sarah malikFebruary 23, 2012 at 8:08 PM

    awww...that was a good one! after reading urs..even i feel like writing a 55-er..been ages that i wrote one :D

    sarah

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  35. indiraFebruary 23, 2012 at 8:15 PM

    short and neatly written . will be remembered for long.

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  36. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 8:18 PM

    @subtlescribbler u too write.. am addicted to it :D thanks for the visit !

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  37. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 8:18 PM

    @indiraThanks Indira JI !

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  38. ArnieFebruary 23, 2012 at 9:11 PM

    Woaaaaa...Awesome Dude!!!!!! I just had goosebumps reading the last line! Phenomenal :)

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  39. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 9:56 PM

    @Arnab MaityThanks a ton bro :)

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  40. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 9:56 PM

    @Ashwini C Naha Thank you so much :D

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  41. BikramFebruary 23, 2012 at 10:03 PM

    ooops too late thats why they say its better ot tell the person what you have in your heart .. so you dont have to repent thinking what could have been ..

    lovely 55'r

    Bikram's

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  42. Saru SinghalFebruary 23, 2012 at 10:53 PM

    Love never dies...Nicely written Deepak:)

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  43. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 11:24 PM

    @Bikramjitthanks a ton bikram ji !

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  44. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 11:25 PM

    @Saru SinghalThank you saru :D

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  45. the AnimatorFebruary 23, 2012 at 11:34 PM

    You are going great guns with this 55 fiction..

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  46. Deepak KarthikFebruary 23, 2012 at 11:37 PM

    @Rayyan Rizwanwow, thanks rayyan :D

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  47. Jen..The Butterfly EffectFebruary 23, 2012 at 11:46 PM

    LOL! It's sad but why am I finding this funny? Deepak,I think you add a potion of funniness to every post of yours,invisibly! :P :)

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  48. DellaFebruary 24, 2012 at 12:06 AM

    wicked!! i loved it !

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  49. Shamsud AhmedFebruary 24, 2012 at 12:38 AM

    smart write...intelligently done. thanks for sharing

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  50. Deepak DoddamaniFebruary 24, 2012 at 3:17 AM

    In very few words you expressed so many things about true love ( i guess its love and not necrophilia :p)...Kudos !!!

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  51. D.NambiarFebruary 24, 2012 at 6:02 AM

    Too late. That's so sad.
    What a coincidence, a few minutes ago I came across a quote on fb, that said -- If you love someone, tell them. Because hearts are often broken with words left unspoken. ~ Joyzamira Garza

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  52. Life UnordinaryFebruary 24, 2012 at 7:33 AM

    profound? im not sure I understand the post :)

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  53. AnuFebruary 24, 2012 at 8:02 AM

    Lovely 55'er. Nice but sad twist at the end :(

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  54. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:12 AM

    @Jen..The Butterfly Effect LOL IS IT???? i never thought that a serious thing will go funny :D :D thanks Jen !

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  55. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:13 AM

    @DellaThanks Della :D

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  56. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:14 AM

    @Shamsud Thank you SHamsud ! keep visiting :D

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  57. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:14 AM

    @deepbaazigarHEHE :D thanks bro !

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  58. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:15 AM

    @D.Nambiar wonderful.. coincidence :D thanks for the visit :D

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  59. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:15 AM

    @Life Unordinary ?? i can't get you JI.. you mean you don't understand it ?

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  60. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:15 AM

    @VaishHAHA.. thanks for the visit and comment !

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  61. RachnaFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:30 AM

    The end was shocking. Good job with the story.

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  62. Thoughts SynchronizedFebruary 24, 2012 at 10:29 AM

    Ouch! that hurts! :( may be they are meant to be together in their next birth.. Good job Deepak! :)

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  63. JerlyFebruary 24, 2012 at 11:00 AM

    Its really very true Deepak. Men wait and time flies by ...They forget that time is worth more and their fears..

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  64. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 11:11 AM

    @RachnaThanks Rachna ji !

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  65. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 11:11 AM

    @Harithaaha ! u finished it on a hopeful note :) thankssss a ton !

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  66. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 11:12 AM

    @Jerlythanks jerly.. nice to see you back :D

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  67. SHANOJ KFebruary 24, 2012 at 11:17 AM

    Nicely written :)

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  68. Meera SundararajanFebruary 24, 2012 at 11:51 AM

    It is never too late - may be she will come out of the coffin after hearing the proposal

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  69. Vinita ApteFebruary 24, 2012 at 2:00 PM

    nice one...took me by surprise :)

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  70. AmitAagFebruary 24, 2012 at 4:34 PM

    Hey Deepak you're a Genius...man!!

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  71. KitchenKarmaFebruary 24, 2012 at 7:18 PM

    Oh dear Dee...I initially thought the man was about to declare his love....:-) Awesome...

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  72. AnonymousFebruary 24, 2012 at 8:46 PM

    Quite a tragedy, Deepak. One wonders why love couldn't bloom earlier.

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  73. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:20 PM

    @SHANOJ KThanks Shanoj !

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  74. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:21 PM

    @Meera SundararajanRightly said !

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  75. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:21 PM

    @Vinita KherdekarGlad for that.. Keep visiting !

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  76. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:21 PM

    @AmitAagKya amitaag JI.. genius ??? nahi ! THANKS FOR THE VISIT

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  77. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:22 PM

    @Suchihaha thanks suchi !

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  78. Deepak KarthikFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:22 PM

    @matheikalThanks uncle :D

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  79. www.mohanmekap.comFebruary 25, 2012 at 1:28 PM

    nice layout and specially the muse gesture on yours blog been fantastic

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  80. Deepak KarthikFebruary 25, 2012 at 1:32 PM

    @MOHAN MANOHARThank you so much !

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  81. Sri ValliFebruary 25, 2012 at 2:25 PM

    That's touching....Nice post :)

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  82. Neha ShandilyaFebruary 25, 2012 at 5:14 PM

    good one.. :)

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  83. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2012 at 6:32 PM

    Black Irony!

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  84. UnknownFebruary 26, 2012 at 11:21 AM

    This is one hell of an awesome post! You have really improved in this 55 fiction you know! Keep writing more stuff like this!:)

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  85. AnkitalalFebruary 26, 2012 at 7:39 PM

    freakin' awesome!!!!!!!!

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  86. MakFebruary 26, 2012 at 11:27 PM

    Mind blowing! "can she hear"..."should i spoil this ceremony?" simply amazing Deepak. Following it.

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  87. RajFebruary 27, 2012 at 12:39 AM

    Fantastic.. What a turnaround..

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  88. UnknownFebruary 27, 2012 at 1:27 PM

    Well it is the story of many of our youngsters of yesterday who did not have the guts to express their love and marry the person of the choice.Family, Responsibility to sisters, caste,religion are some of the cowardly excuses one used to offer.You have just so poetically captured this cowardice. Keep it up

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  89. AnonymousMarch 4, 2012 at 8:07 PM

    cynical eh??

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